Are you thankful for someone’s faithfulness under trial? (2 Tim 1:3–5)

The basic thought is that Paul is thankful to God (v 3) because he remembers Timothy’s sincere faith (V 5). Χάριν ἔχω τῷ θεῷ ... ὑπόμνησιν λαβών, viewing λαβών as a causal participle. See the phrasing above and the detailed argument in my commentary. But what to do with all the intervening phrases?

The first issue is ἐν καθαρᾷ συνειδήσει (“with a clean conscience”). If you merely have it follow the preceding phrase, then Paul is saying that his ancestors (ἀπὸ προγόνων) served God with a clean conscience, and it seems highly unlikely Paul would say that. Rather, both phrases modify the verb λατρεύω. Paul acknowledges that his ancestors served God (as does he), and that Paul serves with a clean conscience.

The standard translation is the least acceptable: “I thank God, whom I serve with a clear conscience the way my forefathers did” (NASB, also CSB, NET, and even NLT). The ESV uses commas to make the distinction: “I thank God whom I serve, as did my ancestors, with a clear conscience, as I remember you ... (also NIV).” The best scenario would be to use parentheses, but translators tend to not like them: “I thank God whom I serve (as did my ancestors) with a clear conscience.” Remember, when English speakers see a sequence of phrases, we link them sequentially; Greek doesn’t. This is why both ἀπὸ προγόνων and ἐν καθαρᾷ συνειδήσει can easily go back to λατρεύω.

The other interesting question has to do with the relationship of the other three phrases: ὡς ἀδιάλειπτον, ἐπιποθῶν, and μεμνημένος, “as unceasingly ... yearning ... remembering.” Given the argument that the λαβών clause follows on the main verb as indicated by the arrows in the phrasing, to what do the other phrases connect, and how do you indicate that in translation?

Unfortunately, most translations break vv 3–5 into two sentences, thus losing the main point that Paul is thankful (v 3) because of Timothy’s sincere faith (v 5), and that the three intermediate phrases are all telling us something about Paul’s thankfulness. All major translations start v 5 as a new sentence, and some make v 4 a sentence, even though the only indicative form in vv 3b–5 is ἔχω, which occurs in a dependent clause. Paul is thankful to God for Timothy’s faithfulness. Paul is especially reminded of Timothy during his regular times of prayer, and those memories cause Paul to yearn to see Timothy and be filled with joy, and cause him to remember the last time they were together, a time that ended in tears. Hard to say that in any translation except perhaps a natural language one.

But one thing is clear: you can’t assume that your word-for-word translation shows the underlying Greek. The only time you can see this is if you already know the Greek, which makes the idea of “transparency to the original” linguistic nonsense. Every single verse is changed in translation.

One of Paul’s greatest sources of joy is in seeing Timothy’s faith hold up under fire. In my commentary I comment, “Paul has been deserted by most of his associates, except for one faithful person (1:15-18). Timothy likewise should not be discouraged or feel abandoned. Rather he should be single-minded about the gospel and loyal to Paul's proclamation of it (2:1-7).” Along with Onesiphorus can be added Timothy’s faithfulness.

Whose faithfulness in the midst of trial is an encouragement to you? Are you an encouragement to anyone?